Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
1. Contents page - the small line of type to the right of 40 should be just 1 line sitting below that huge word above it. Think of it as providing a foundation for the huge word.
2. Contents page - the type in the white box, "Creature of the Black Lagoon" crashes into the edges of the white, and isn't styled consistently with the type in the other white boxes.
3. Last page -pay attention to the white paragraphs of type. I see strange line breaks. Also - this column appears too wide... in fact the type is crashing into the photo. Please make it more narrow so the column sits well within the black background and does not overprint any texture. You have plenty of room for this column to be longer - and the shorter line width will help us read it.
Looks really good, it definitely has that horror feel to it!
ReplyDeleteAlmost there! I see just 3 more issues:
ReplyDelete1. Contents page - the small line of type to the right of 40 should be just 1 line sitting below that huge word above it. Think of it as providing a foundation for the huge word.
2. Contents page - the type in the white box, "Creature of the Black Lagoon" crashes into the edges of the white, and isn't styled consistently with the type in the other white boxes.
3. Last page -pay attention to the white paragraphs of type. I see strange line breaks. Also - this column appears too wide... in fact the type is crashing into the photo. Please make it more narrow so the column sits well within the black background and does not overprint any texture. You have plenty of room for this column to be longer - and the shorter line width will help us read it.