Project 3 Rework - Jon Lerew
In this project, I changed the type of the third mockup to make it so 1951 doesn't blend in with the image as much by removing the yellow.
On the website itself (not pictured), I adjusted an error where the header images would float left when the screen size was too large. I toyed with the idea of incorporating script fonts in the header but I found that they made the bakery feel too old-fashioned mom-and-pop-ish instead of the suave, modern shop that it now is.
On the website itself (not pictured), I adjusted an error where the header images would float left when the screen size was too large. I toyed with the idea of incorporating script fonts in the header but I found that they made the bakery feel too old-fashioned mom-and-pop-ish instead of the suave, modern shop that it now is.
Nice mockup! Looks nice from the navigator, headline, to the website content and designs. For the monitors, I would crop to only the website; the dock bar of softwares at the bottom and the transparent section of your desktop on top needs to be removed.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Gina. A very nice design with pleasant colors and a good variety of images.
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