Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
This design is very interesting. The change in lighting from one side to the other is very seamless. I feel like the flowers would be in front of the triangle.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Dan about the flowers. I also notice that the triangle fades away under the wheel a little bit, maybe clean up the mask slightly there?
ReplyDeleteI think this looks great and I agree with Dan and Jon, if you were to get the bush edges in front of the triangle it would sell the design more.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comments above. I also find myself wondering what is happening to this car as it passes through the triangle? Shouldn't something more visual happen? Should it change color? Texture?
ReplyDeleteThe top of this is just begging to hold a headline. Something like "Commuting can be an adventure"... or something that suggests we find excitement in driving this car.
Fun project!
I like how fun this looks! Makes me think of driving this car through the portal into luxary, so maybe the back of the car would look more broken down or old. Just a thought.
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