Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
Resume + Business Card and Logo- Bella Marinelli
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Critiques and suggestions are welcome! A different color palette than what I usually work with but I had fun and found it refreshing.
Earlier in this blog I questioned the serif font I see... I still do. Consider finding a contemporary sans serif to match with your funky, fun headline font.
I wonder if the color areas of your resume are a bit distracting from the content. Have you considered just running the color down the column, and not with the arms that stretch out to the right?
Also - are the subheadings challenging your name/icon in the visual hierarchy? Can they be downplayed a bit? Maybe the headings in the right column (where most of your content sits) should be styled in a manner similar to the body copy?
I love the color palette still, very lively and bright. I agree with Coni about the orange bars. Maybe try to incorporate the orange into the text itself? Also, I feel like there could be a little more content. For example, under skills, you talk about your technical skills, but there's no mention of the more human side of your skills (time management, communication, etc.)
Earlier in this blog I questioned the serif font I see... I still do. Consider finding a contemporary sans serif to match with your funky, fun headline font.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if the color areas of your resume are a bit distracting from the content. Have you considered just running the color down the column, and not with the arms that stretch out to the right?
Also - are the subheadings challenging your name/icon in the visual hierarchy? Can they be downplayed a bit? Maybe the headings in the right column (where most of your content sits) should be styled in a manner similar to the body copy?
I love the color palette still, very lively and bright. I agree with Coni about the orange bars. Maybe try to incorporate the orange into the text itself? Also, I feel like there could be a little more content. For example, under skills, you talk about your technical skills, but there's no mention of the more human side of your skills (time management, communication, etc.)
ReplyDeleteI agree with everything said but it is coming along well.
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