Project 2- Bella Marinelli

I didn't stray too far from the original design so all ideas are welcome. :)

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  1. The design is beautiful, the small adjustments you made really helped to finish it. I did notice a couple of typos in the body copy, though: United States needs to be capitalized in the second line. I think there is a double space between "will" and "need" in the third line. And don't forget the T in sanctuaries! Also, consider putting a comma after "Every year". Aside from those couple errors, everything else looks wonderful.

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  2. Looks great, I think it was a good idea to get rid of "Parrots" since the image would give us an idea already.

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