Project 10 Rework - Jon Lerew
To rework this design it was mostly minor adjustments (fixed some islands and such). I decided to leave the proportions of the peace sign alone because I felt that it started to become unbalanced when I adjusted it. It's not in the mockup frame right now but I'll wait to re-add it there for when the final version is ready.
I really love this design and the use of textures and colors, very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure what you mean by the proportion change you tried, so this might be repetitive... but I'm wondering if the center vertical line (that separates the sign from the land masses) seems too thin? Should it not be the same width as the lines that are the rest of the sign? This is the most important part of the design, where everyone will spend time trying to understand the underlying concept, so let's make sure it doesn't appear to be a mistake. I vote for consistency in those strokes.
ReplyDeleteStrong visual concept!