Project 11 Feedback Needed - Jon Lerew
So I haven't been able to work on this project because the typefaces I used are only on the school computers, but in the meantime, if anyone else has more suggestions throw them my way for when school is back in session!
This could be a good portfolio piece because it shows your early conceptual process leading up to your solutions.
ReplyDeleteHowever, is the bottom section, I'm not sure what I'm seeing. Is this a mockup of what you propose? Are you presenting us with something that we should feel is representative of reality? The style of illustration seems a bit simplistic (with black strokes around the door, it feels very much like a technical drawing) but yet contains lovely graphics (in upper right). So... this just seems a bit confusing for me, as I am looking at this for the first time. Do you want to have the mock ups look more realistic? Do you want to actually use photos of the wall, upon which you place your illustrations? Or, change your style and create more realistic environment with your drawing?