Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
Project 8 Final - Jon Lerew
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No additional critiques were given so this is the same as the previous version.
This could be considered done, I remember looking at it closely last time... sorry I didn't leave a comment. The only thought I have is that the type at the top isn't as easily readable as it could be, especially the last right hand one. Do you want to darken a section of the images at the top to increase contrast behind the type? I am picturing a bar of darkened color that consistently runs across all of them. That would be my solution - there are others. It's a minor detail, but at this size (blog), the readability is compromised. So... it might be compromised also in your digital portfolio.
This could be considered done, I remember looking at it closely last time... sorry I didn't leave a comment. The only thought I have is that the type at the top isn't as easily readable as it could be, especially the last right hand one. Do you want to darken a section of the images at the top to increase contrast behind the type? I am picturing a bar of darkened color that consistently runs across all of them. That would be my solution - there are others. It's a minor detail, but at this size (blog), the readability is compromised. So... it might be compromised also in your digital portfolio.
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