Request for Feedback on Project 3 - Jon Lerew

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So my web project Maximilien's mainly got feedback on the mockup portion. I did what I could with that but unfortunately I no longer have the photoshop files so no drastic changes can be made to them without remaking them completely. However, I still have all the files for the website itself so if anyone has any suggestions for that I would be happy to play with them. (I know implementing a script typeface was suggested so I will play more with that too).






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  1. Jon LerewMarch 3, 2019 at 5:51 PM

    Also my fourth project rework (Nano Hue) hasn't gotten any critiques yet so feel free to jump on that tooooooooo

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    1. Coni PorterMarch 4, 2019 at 11:19 AM

      I just looked it up, sorry not to have commented. This is what I left: "Looks done to me."

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  2. Coni PorterMarch 4, 2019 at 11:27 AM

    Question - what size body copy are you using? Some pages (especially the history page) contain line widths that travel across the whole page. Wow... that's a lot of words on 1 line. Can we read it easily, and return to the left without loosing our place? Body copy sizes for web range from 14pt - 16pt, depending on font. Let me know what size you are using.

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