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I was told that the text getting in the way of the imagery which may have caused confusion/chaos, so I moved things around to accommodate, and i think it worked out, but I am still open to suggestions to improve it.
The update version is nice, it doesn't feel cluttered.
ReplyDeleteThe text change is definitely an improvement. That said, it allows us to see the image behind a little more clearly, and I think some work could be done there. It looks almost like a video game? And I think part of the reason for that is the head lights. Perhaps try one of the flares we learned about last semester to help with that!
ReplyDeleteIt does feel much less cluttered and you're able to focus on the subject more.
ReplyDeleteBig improvement. Minor change: consider breaking the subheading after the word "crash" to help that bottom line fill out a bit more.
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