Project 5 Final (but suggestion wanted) - Jonathan Lerew
So I stuck with the original more formal variant for the text, but edited it slightly and changed the quotations to make it more eye-catching. I also adjusted the box behind the body text to make it more opaque and added a drop cap to break things up a little bit. I'm not sure if I like the lime variant or the lilac variant better, which one do you guys like?
I think either color is fine, although the yellow unifies nicely with her dress.
ReplyDeleteQuote - what if you pulled the word "SILENT" to it's own line. I think, because of the style contrast you are using, it deserves its own line... and the shape of the text block would be improved... maybe. Try it?