Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
Service Learning Client - Gina
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This was their original version. This is my version. I added elements from the original and added their building as a backdrop. Thought a poetry book was a good idea as a focal point. Please give me some feedback!
Love the design, significantly better than the original. I feel like the book is a little too floaty, though. Is there some way you can ground it more in the composition? I also wonder if your alternate colored icon would look better on this poster than the white one.
A big improvement from their original! I, too, find myself wondering about that white circle logo - it is the only element that is white on the page. And, it seems small. Have you tried to enlarge it, and use another color for its background?
I think the book with flowers is quite lovely and the warm color palette is beautiful. Who is their audience? I'm not sure - but it would be important to consider if these decisions speaks to the audience.
This was their original version. This is my version. I added elements from the original and added their building as a backdrop. Thought a poetry book was a good idea as a focal point. Please give me some feedback!
I think this is great, it has some life in it, and is more modern with style.
ReplyDeleteLove the design, significantly better than the original. I feel like the book is a little too floaty, though. Is there some way you can ground it more in the composition? I also wonder if your alternate colored icon would look better on this poster than the white one.
ReplyDeleteA big improvement from their original! I, too, find myself wondering about that white circle logo - it is the only element that is white on the page. And, it seems small. Have you tried to enlarge it, and use another color for its background?
ReplyDeleteI think the book with flowers is quite lovely and the warm color palette is beautiful. Who is their audience? I'm not sure - but it would be important to consider if these decisions speaks to the audience.
ReplyDeleteI do like the warm colors and the overall design is very modern. It's a big improvement over the original.