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I made the border of the monitor slimmer, which leaves me with more room and because of the curves a more modern look, and I made the portrait in the corner slightly bigger, I took the advice of getting rid of "Macintosh" and just having the apple logo.

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  1. DanielMarch 30, 2019 at 5:56 PM

    It looks much more sleek then before and I do like that 'Macintosh' was replaced with the apple logo. It doesn't distract as much but still gets the point across.

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  2. Jon LerewMarch 31, 2019 at 10:10 AM

    Much less cramped, awesome. Having the Apple at the bottom is definitely an improvement, maybe even make it a little smaller just so it's not hitting the screen.

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  3. Coni PorterApril 1, 2019 at 7:40 AM

    Have you really looked at the screen in front of you? Look carefully at the corners and edges. I think this could look even more contemporary if the edges of your poster really follow what you see. Better type columns and interior layout - good!

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