Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
LUK Design 2.0- Daniel Hurst
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I changed the color of the text from yellow to a more exciting blue that pops from the orange wall. I made the man taller and gave him a shadow so he fits into the design better.
I think putting the shadow behind the guy was good idea, it helps. He still looks a little too wide/squished. The color of the text for "it helps me with my problems" appears to be a darker blue, i think you should use that same blue for the others (the lighter blue text) so they show up just as good.
Yes, please fix that poor person - he is definitely distorted. Because he is just standing there, I wonder about enlarging him (even more), and bleeding 1/2 of him off the page to the right? Think about it - his figure would become much more interesting on the page. We will only see 1/2 of him!
I also suggest you enlarge the heading, so it works together with his figure to become a focal point. I'm not sure the blue text is as readable as it could/should be. It's better, but I wonder if you could pick up the dark blue of his pants and use it? A darker value makes sense to me. It's coming along!
I think putting the shadow behind the guy was good idea, it helps. He still looks a little too wide/squished. The color of the text for "it helps me with my problems" appears to be a darker blue, i think you should use that same blue for the others (the lighter blue text) so they show up just as good.
ReplyDeleteLooking much better. The white text at the bottom I think needs either a little more space on the right side or should be underneath the shadow layer.
ReplyDeleteYes, please fix that poor person - he is definitely distorted. Because he is just standing there, I wonder about enlarging him (even more), and bleeding 1/2 of him off the page to the right? Think about it - his figure would become much more interesting on the page. We will only see 1/2 of him!
ReplyDeleteI also suggest you enlarge the heading, so it works together with his figure to become a focal point. I'm not sure the blue text is as readable as it could/should be. It's better, but I wonder if you could pick up the dark blue of his pants and use it? A darker value makes sense to me. It's coming along!