Project 1 Rework - Jon Lerew

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My first project is the menu project from Publication Design. I took the suggestions made to remove the indentation on the about section and move the vegetarian symbols inside the border of the pasta section. On the drink menu, I removed the hyphenation at the end of lines as well as changing the shade of green to clash less with the text.





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  1. Nicole WetherbyFebruary 12, 2019 at 8:00 PM

    I really love the concept/theme of this restaurant menu. My only suggestion is to change the text color from Red to maybe the tan color you have throughout the menu. The red text is hard to read on the purple and the darker green.

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  2. Samantha SykesFebruary 18, 2019 at 8:02 AM

    The indentation being fixed on the About paragraph being fixed is great, while the color unity feels good to the overall feel of the menu.

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  3. Gina KhouthFebruary 18, 2019 at 11:25 AM

    Love the colors, composition, and concept. Looks great!

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  4. Shellron GordonFebruary 18, 2019 at 11:51 AM

    I think your choice of color and font throughout the menu is very fitting.

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  5. DanielFebruary 20, 2019 at 8:55 AM

    The colors and angles that make up the menu is very fitting for the restaurant this is made for.

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  6. Coni PorterFebruary 20, 2019 at 4:27 PM

    The value of the background colors seem to be mid-value, which could mean that the body copy isn't as readable as it could/should be. Increasing the contrast between the background color and color of text makes some sense to me. Otherwise, this design is really quite nice.

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