Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
I really like the way the boat blends into the clouds(?). I also feel like it's balanced very well with way the sky is darker on the left to balance against the pop of color in the red.
I agree with Jon how seamlessly the different images blend into one another almost like it really was a real image. The red is very eye catching and gives great contrast to the dark blues and whites.
I like the the image and the boat I can't tell if it's sinking or floating, its intriguing. The red make the boat your focal point and then you notice the rest. What would make this next level is if as the boat was crashing up through the wave clouds it made a cloud splash, that way it wouldn't look like a sinking ship, unless that is what you were going for?
There is a story here.. .what what is it? Nicole has asked a good question, is the boat sinking? I can tell the front of the boat is below the sea of clouds. So what happened? HOW DID THIS BOAT START TO SINK? Where is the story here... could be developed a bit more with... how, what, when questions being answered by added elements.
I'm trying to figure out if this is a boat sinking or a boat floating, but judging by the people(?) on it not being seen off the boat and the subtle transparency of the white I'm betting on it floating. I agree with Coni, adding a headline could definitely help bring out the clear story behind your design.
I really like the way the boat blends into the clouds(?). I also feel like it's balanced very well with way the sky is darker on the left to balance against the pop of color in the red.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jon how seamlessly the different images blend into one another almost like it really was a real image. The red is very eye catching and gives great contrast to the dark blues and whites.
ReplyDeleteI like the the image and the boat I can't tell if it's sinking or floating, its intriguing. The red make the boat your focal point and then you notice the rest. What would make this next level is if as the boat was crashing up through the wave clouds it made a cloud splash, that way it wouldn't look like a sinking ship, unless that is what you were going for?
ReplyDeleteThere is a story here.. .what what is it? Nicole has asked a good question, is the boat sinking? I can tell the front of the boat is below the sea of clouds. So what happened? HOW DID THIS BOAT START TO SINK? Where is the story here... could be developed a bit more with... how, what, when questions being answered by added elements.
ReplyDeleteAnother thought - adding a headline.
ReplyDeleteI'm trying to figure out if this is a boat sinking or a boat floating, but judging by the people(?) on it not being seen off the boat and the subtle transparency of the white I'm betting on it floating.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Coni, adding a headline could definitely help bring out the clear story behind your design.