Project 6 4/4/19- Daniel Hurst












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  1. These have come a long way, and the visual effects are really nice. A few more tweaks and you'll be done.

    1. Consider changing the word "Revolutionary" to Blink in #1 to be consistent with the other 2, and also improve the shape of that text block to be more compact.

    2. Now that your images are done, please consider using white for the words Blink Dice inside your logo, and reduce the logo, possibly a lot. Since your typography includes the words Blink Dice, we don't have to depend on your logo to read the name of your product. It's just the logo (as it should be). So, pull it into the design further (it may hang too close to the page edges now) and reduce it. Try it and see what you think.

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