Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
I agree with Jon, the texture and that striped background helps breathe some more life into your work. The only thing I wonder about is if "meals" really needs that underline, other than that looks good to go.
The texture is perfect in the background - and although it is pretty bright, it adds a lot to the design. I've not mentioned the ragged edges of the heading type before, because I was waiting to see how this all comes together. But - if you really want me to think that those ragged edges are "bites" then I wonder if you need a more bold font, to give you more room to take a bite or two? Maybe a bit out of the P and D makes sense... because I still think you should put the utensils on top of the heading... so the heading sits beneath the knife and fork.
The texture helps so much. Now this really feels ready for the holidays.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jon, the texture and that striped background helps breathe some more life into your work. The only thing I wonder about is if "meals" really needs that underline, other than that looks good to go.
ReplyDeleteThe texture is perfect in the background - and although it is pretty bright, it adds a lot to the design. I've not mentioned the ragged edges of the heading type before, because I was waiting to see how this all comes together. But - if you really want me to think that those ragged edges are "bites" then I wonder if you need a more bold font, to give you more room to take a bite or two? Maybe a bit out of the P and D makes sense... because I still think you should put the utensils on top of the heading... so the heading sits beneath the knife and fork.
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