Project 4 final

The last changes I made was breaking the sentence before "crash" as suggested and made the headlights of the oncoming car flares. (before i had painted ones that didn't look the most convincing.)

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  1. Headlights are much better now and and the break in the subhead is much more natural.

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  2. Last detail would be to reduce the leading on the second line of the subhead "than a non-texting driver" so that line moves up to join the one above it and leaves more negative space between the text and the image.

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  3. A much better design but I agree with Coni on the subhead.

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