Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
Project 8 rework
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I added in a flare for the pearl, warped the shape of the coral a bit and made each thing darker as well as adding in the seaweed.
Your color decisions add a strong dynamic quality! Nice. Are you sure you don't want to enlarge that crab claw? I hope you intend to include your well drawn sketch in your portfolio - it adds context to the work.
The changes significantly help to add more balance to the design and make it feel less empty. I think now it's time to really ground each piece into the composite. Painting shadows in where needed can help to make each elements feel like it's truly part of the scene.
Your color decisions add a strong dynamic quality! Nice. Are you sure you don't want to enlarge that crab claw? I hope you intend to include your well drawn sketch in your portfolio - it adds context to the work.
ReplyDeleteThe changes significantly help to add more balance to the design and make it feel less empty. I think now it's time to really ground each piece into the composite. Painting shadows in where needed can help to make each elements feel like it's truly part of the scene.
ReplyDeleteIt's looking much better and more balanced.
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