Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
I know you changed the text based on previous suggestions but to be honest I'm not sure if it's better like this or not. What is the font size now (14pt?) and what was previously. Also, I think you should refrain from making the URL blue since it's not a hyperlink that you can actually click on.
Placing the headline on top of the illustration of hands may obscure the hands too much. What about reducing the headline (a lot) to fit below the hands in a downward curving arc? I would suggest drawing a baseline that follows the curve of the hands. The other page elements will need to move down the page to make room. Are those pictures distorted? The one of the right is definitely distorted.
I know you changed the text based on previous suggestions but to be honest I'm not sure if it's better like this or not. What is the font size now (14pt?) and what was previously. Also, I think you should refrain from making the URL blue since it's not a hyperlink that you can actually click on.
ReplyDeletePlacing the headline on top of the illustration of hands may obscure the hands too much. What about reducing the headline (a lot) to fit below the hands in a downward curving arc? I would suggest drawing a baseline that follows the curve of the hands. The other page elements will need to move down the page to make room. Are those pictures distorted? The one of the right is definitely distorted.
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